译文共欣赏 精彩相与析
2015-08-10王红李连生
王红 李连生
【摘要】本文通过对国家主席习近平2015年新年贺词不同英文版例举,比较不同的表达方法,探讨翻译的理想境界问题。
【关键词】新年贺词 英文版本 翻译 理想境界
2014年最后一天,习近平发表了2015年新年贺词。习主席的新年贺词朴实,真切,耐读,可亲,具体,实在。海内外专家和媒体普遍认为习主席新年贺词贴近人民心理、回应人民关切,平实、朴素的风格让人耳目一新。中国中央电视台国际频道(CCTV International下简称CCTV)、中国国际广播电台(CRI)、外交部网站(Ministry of Foreign Affairs of PRC,下简称MFA)等媒体都同时刊登了习主席新年贺词的英文译文,下面就以上媒体的不同译文版本进行比较,与大家共同学习和体会。
1.这一年,我们锐意推进改革,啃下了不少硬骨头,出台了一系列重大改革举措,许多改革举措同老百姓的利益密切相关。
CCTV:During this past year,we have pressed ahead with our reforms with keen determination.We have cracked many hard nuts,introducing a string of major reform measures.Many of these reforms are closely intertwined with the daily lives of all our people.
CRI:In the past year,we pushed forward reforms with strong commitment,conquered many hardships and introduced a series of important reform measures,many of which are closely associated with the interests of the general public.
MFA:During the past year,we have pushed forward reform with strong determination,cracked many hard nuts,and introduced a string of major reform measures,many of which are closely related to the interests of the general public.
归纳:“锐意推进改革”出现三种表达:1)pressed ahead with our reforms with keen determination; 2)pushed forward reform with strong determination; 3)pushed forward reforms with strong commitment
“啃下了不少硬骨头”出现两种表达:cracked many hard nuts和conquered many hardships;
“一系列”出现两种表达:a string of 和a series of;
“密切相关”出现三中表达:1)are closely intertwined with;2)are closely associated with;3)are closely related to;
“老百姓”出现两种表达:our people和the general public
2.我们适应经济发展新常态,积极推动经济社会发展,人民生活有了新的改善。
CCTV:We have adapted to new normals in our economic development.We have actively promoted economic and social development.Living standards have improved.
CRI: We worked to adapt to the new normal of economic growth and actively pushed forward economic and social development,resulting in further improvement in people's lives.
MFA:We have adapted to the new normal of economic growth,actively promoted economic and social development,and brought about further improvement in people's lives.
归纳:“经济发展新常态”出现两种表达:new normals in our economic development和the new normal of economic growth;
“推动”出现两种表达:pushed forward和promoted;
“人民生活”出现两种表达:Living standards和people's lives
3.12月12日,南水北调中线一期工程正式通水。
CCTV:On the 12th of December,Phase 1 of the central route of Chinas South to North water diversion project went into operation.
CRI:On December 12,the first phase of the central route of Water Diversion Project from South to North was officially completed.
MFA:On 12 December,the first phase of the central route of the South-North Water Diversion Project went into operation.
归纳:“南水北调工程”出现三种译法:1)Chinas South to North water diversion project; 2)Water Diversion Project; 3)the South-North Water Diversion Project;
“正式通水”出现两种译法:went into operation 和was officially completed
4.沿线40多万人移民搬迁,为这个工程作出了无私奉献,我们要向他们表示敬意,希望他们在新的家园生活幸福。
CCTV:More than 400,000 people along the route have been relocated.They have made a selfless contribution to this project.We express our respect to them and wish them happiness in their new homes.
CRI: More than 400 thousand residents along the route were relocated.We pay our sincere tributes to them for their sacrifice,and wish them a happy life in their new homes.
MFA:More than 400,000 people along the route have been relocated.We pay tribute to them for their selfless contribution,and wish them a happy life in their new homes.
归纳:“向他们表示敬意”出现两种译法:pay our sincere tributes to them 和express our respect to them;……
