青山遮不住 毕竟东流去
2021-06-15蒲红燕
蒲红燕
【摘 要】传统语文的学习观念是从听、说、读、写四个方面去学习,对于写作教学,尤其是文章结尾的写作技巧方面的教学,大多数人认为是一件比较容易凸显个性的事,因此上每个作者在实际的写作实践当中,都会对写作方法有自己独到的见解,因此写出来的文章也因此各有千秋。学生作文也因为学生的社会经历不同,对客观事物的看法不同,基本知识储备量的不同,写出来的作文也是风格迥异。实践教学中,如何写好一篇文章的结尾,也是一门技巧,结尾写好了,可以有达到青山隐隐、曲径通幽的艺术效果。
【关键词】作文教学;文章结尾;写作方法
中图分类号:G623.24 文献标识码:A 文章编号:0493-2099(2021)14-0148-03
Thick Mountain should not Stop the River from Flowing into the Sea
——On Writing Skills at the End
(Heiquan Town Central Primary School, Gaotai County, Zhangye City, Gansu Province,China) PU Hongyan
【Abstract】The traditional Chinese learning concept is to learn from the four aspects of listening, speaking, reading and writing. For writing teaching, especially the teaching of writing skills at the end of an article, most people think that it is easier to highlight individuality.Therefore, because of the different social experiences of students, different views on objective things, and the different reserves of basic knowledge, the styles of the composition written by students are also very different.In practice teaching, writing the end of an essay is also a skill. Once the end is written, it can achieve the artistic effect of faint green mountains and quiet winding paths.
【Keywords】Composition teaching; End of the article; Writing method
一、好的结尾能彰显人物的精神力量
要写好作文的结尾,需要掌握一定的方法技巧。学生作文里面的人物,都是生活当中生活在身边的那些人,如养育他们的父母,那么在有关描写父母的作文当中,如何要写好作文的结尾,一般情况下引用名言警句,用抒情的方式结尾,效果会比较好一点。引用名言警句的好处是名言警句里所蕴含的丰富的哲理,能够折射出父母含辛茹苦、任劳任怨的奉献精神;在遣词造句方面,要显得非常的精炼,能够直奔主题;在作文的风格方面,要能够显示出作文的庄重严肃,而庄重严肃的文风,这也正是对父母精神的一种颂扬。就像歌词里所唱的那样“父亲是头拉车的牛”,是典型的父爱的写照,父亲就像一头老黄牛,含辛茹苦勤劳持家,无私的地把自己的一切奉献给了家庭,奉献给了儿女。……
