李永红

(山东省淄博实验中学)

本人有幸参加了今年的山东省高考书面表达阅卷，了解到了一些书面表达的评分细则和注意事项，注意到了一些弊端和问题，由此想到了一些书面表达备考中的重难点及写作中的策略，记录下来共享读者。

一、高考英语书面表达评分细则

二、注意事项

评分时，现根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否及格线。

词数少于120，从应得分中减去2分。关于大错、小错的问题：

小错：单词拼写、冠词、大小写、标点符号错误。

大错：搭配错误、词语用错（介词、名词、动词、形容词、副词）、时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词、句式等错误。

三、专家所给的几个样板分

(1)

I am sorry to tell you that our plan to visit Beijing next weekend has to be delayed because I have an activity of great significance to take part in.

Word came that the Student Union of my school is going to hold an activity which aims to encourage citizens to lead a low-carbon life on the next weekend.Nowadays,it’s exactly too much emission of greenhouse gases that causes the greenhouse effect and does serious damage to the environment.As a consequence,I think it’s quite necessary to spread the benefits of low-carbon life.What’s more,although travelling is an excellent idea,if I missed the opportunity,I’ll regret in a long time.

However,we can carry out our plan on the first weekend of next month.What about your opinion?

Look forward to your reply.

(专家点评：有虚拟，语法结构复杂。得分28)

(2)

I’m so sorry to tell you that I can’t go on the trip to Beijing with you next weekend.It’s a pity that I can’t go with you.I had been so excited about it.But now,I can’t do it.

Next weekend,my school has a very im-portant activity.Many old students of my school will come to see the change of their mother school.As the master of my class,I have to attend the activity to guard them around my school and tell them the new things in my school.After these,I will have lunch with them.

How about going to Beijing another time?How about the coming summer holiday?During the holiday we have more time to enjoy the beautiful city,please write to me soon if you agree.(22分)

(3)

I will talk something to you.You can’t feel very happy.Next Sunday we should go a trip to Beijing,but next sunday I have something to do.I’m sorry to.I can’t go a trip,but something must be done.

As the matter of fact,my sister had a baby.He only have two years old,next Sunday my sister is busy to do work,she doesn’t have any time.So I have to help her.I must look after her baby.I will try my best to help my sister.I think do this thing is very hard,because many babys often cry.I don’t know how to do.

Next Sunday I doesn’t have more time,so we can’t go a trip.This Sunday!Do you have more time?if you have,we can go a trip on this Sunday.Can you?

(专家给分：14 分)

四、阅卷中发现的问题和不利因素

学生写作中的一些问题：

1.洋洋洒洒型。一些学生洋洋洒洒写了很多失约的理由，甚至扯到了世博，然而题目要求的三个要点只表达了两个，或者一个，失分较多，直接就不及格了。语言要是再有点问题，那就得分很低了。

2.错误百出型。有些文章要点全有，但是语句错误百出，如果错的只是单词拼写、冠词、大小写、标点符号等较小错误倒是扣分不多，及格还是能捞回来的。但如果是大错，如搭配错误、词语用错（介词、名词、动词、形容词、副词）、时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词、句式等错误，那分数就会被从及格分以上扣到及格分以下了。

3.平淡无味型。大多数的文章属于这个类型，要点也够了，语言也没有大错，但是所写内容就和便条一样，所给的失约理由寻找得不当。……