赏析Lesson 22: The Giant (II)九年级英语衔接版
2019-08-07和宝红
和宝红
本文巧用对比,围绕巨人对待小孩前后态度的变化,花园景色一波三折变化的前后对比,孩子们对待巨人态度变化的前后原因对比,从而鲜明地表达出中心思想:自私是要不得的。作者在语言运用方面,对动词的推敲和妙用,使得文章的主题入木三分。
第一自然段作者用出神入化的动词和句子描绘了一幕非常美妙的景象,衬托出孩子们对花园的眷恋。
The giant saw a sight.
Birds were f about and s and flowers were through the green grass. The trees were w their arms softly in the w wind. Children were r about and sitting in the b of the trees.
It was a .
鸟儿唱着歌儿自由飞翔,花儿从绿草中探出头来,树木在暖风中伸展着胳膊,孩子们到处跑着,有的坐在树枝上,这是一幅多么美妙的画面。
Then the giant saw that many children...
第二自然段当巨人看到被冰雪覆盖的销声匿迹的花园随着更多的孩子们从墙上的一个洞里钻进来,美妙的春天又回来了。随着花园景色的变化,巨人冰冷的心融化了,他下决心要拆掉墙,但是孩子们对巨人的态度并未改变。
The giants heart.” How I have been!”he said.”Now I know -spring would not here!” The giant
made a decision and went out to his garden.” I will knock down the wall!” he said to himself.
第三自然段显示巨人态度的变化从对待一个小男孩开始,当孩子们正玩得尽兴的时候,他们突然看见了巨人,其他的孩子都跑掉了,只有一个孩子没跑,作者用了一个词“But”,花园里出现了什么样的场面?作者设下悬念,读者会迫不及待地读下去。But one little boy did not because he did not see the giant.这个小男孩正在干什么?He was trying to reach up to the spreading branches of a tree.這句中的正尽力,说明小男孩被大自然的美景所陶醉。正在伸展开的,说明树的繁茂,小男孩在这样美妙的景色中尽情地玩耍,多么愉快!这些细节描写渲染了气氛,为巨人态度的变化做了铺垫。突然,凶恶的巨人出现,但出人意料,巨人这次突然改变了形象,哪个词突现了他的改变?……
