广东 彭明芳

激活·素养解读

一级目标__________________________________语言能力文化意识______思维品质学习能力二级目标________________________________1.学会有逻辑地谈论计划与愿望；2.运用名词性从句以及定语从句，阐述自己的计划和愿望，并提出自己的观点，写一篇关于职业梦想的演讲稿。_________________________________________培养为梦想坚持不懈、努力奋斗、勇于探索的品质。_______________________1.掌握语篇段落之间以及段落内的逻辑关系；2.培养梳理概括、整合迁移信息的思维品质，并能表达职业梦想、选择原因及实现途径，真切地表达自己对职业梦想的信念。_______________________________能够从阅读文本中提取写作的素材，如优美的句型、丰富的词块、文本的要点，并形成有效的写作支架。

实践·读写整合

My dream career

我的职业梦想

1Since I was a child, I have been addicted to books.I can't go a single day without reading something.As time goes by, I am definitely sure that my dream career is to become a professional writer like Shakespeare and J.K.Rowling.

2In order to make my dream come true, I have made it a rule to pick up a pen and just let my thoughts out every day.As a child, I used to write stories.As a teenager, I was encouraged by my teachers who told me that I had an innate (与生俱来的) talent for writing.They knew how passionate I am about writing, and how that passion slips through my fingertips to the paper.In my freshman year, I tried to figure out whatA Midsummer Night's DreamandThe Tragedy of Julius Caesarwere about.Macbethwas much easier to understand in my sophomore year.Gradually, I can be inspired by anything: an expression,a song and a movie.Once I get inspired, it's like the wheels turning faster and faster as I think out one possible story after another.I'm working so hard to make a breakthrough in the competitive world of publishing.

3I don't really know the reason why I love writing so much.But what I know is that I want to write and leave something behind.I always feel that there is something in my mind about putting a story down on paper for friends across the globe to read and understand,and about finding just the right words to describe what I can see so clearly in my head.Through writing, I have found true happiness and the value of life, which means a lot to me.

4Now, I have realized my dream career and become a professional writer.As the old saying goes, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”I think the secret to achieving a dream career is that we need not just talent,but passion and perseverance,which are essential to us.

Activity A Reading for understanding

语篇解码

（一）主题归纳

What is the text mainly about?

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（二）结构分析与信息梳理

Fill in the blanks according to the text with only one word for each blank.

My dream career__________________________________What is my dream_____________________career?I have been 1.______ to books.My dream career is to become a 2.______ writer.________________________I have made it a 3.______ to pick up a pen and just let my thoughts out every How do I realize my dream career?day.As a child, I used to write stories.As a teenager, I was 4.______ by my teachers.As a college student, I tried to 5.______ out the works of Shakespeare.Gradually, I can be 6.______ by anything and think out one possible story af-______________________________________________________________________________________________ter_another.

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Activity B Reading for writing

一、词块积累

be addicted to 沉溺于

as time goes by 随着时间的流逝

make one's dream come true 使某人的梦想实现

let one's thoughts out 表达某人的想法

have a talent for 在……方面有天赋

slip through one's fingertips to the paper 从某人的指尖滑落到纸上

be inspired by 被……鼓舞

think out 仔细思考；全面思考

make a breakthrough 有所突破

leave something behind 留下一些东西

in the competitive world of publishing 在竞争激烈的出版界

realize a dream career 实现一个职业梦想

be essential to 对……必不可少

二、典句赏析

1.宾语从句

I always feel that there is something in my mind about putting a story down on paper for friends across the globe to read and understand, and about finding just the right words to describe what I can see so clearly in my head.我总觉得，把一个故事写在纸上，让世界各地的朋友阅读和理解，找到合适的词语来描述我脑海中清晰可见的东西，是我心中的一件大事。

【点石成金】该句有两个宾语从句，第一个宾语从句由that 引导；第二个宾语从句由what 引导。

【例句仿写】只有当我们明白自己热衷的是什么的时候，我们才知道自己将来要做什么。

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2.定语从句

I think the secret to achieving a dream career is that we need not just talent, but passion and perseverance, which are essential to us.我认为实现职业梦想的秘诀是我们不仅需要天赋，还需要热情和毅力，这些对我们来说是至关重要的。

【点石成金】which 引导定语从句，指代passion and perseverance，目的是强调实现职业梦想的关键不仅仅只是天赋，热情和毅力也是必不可少的。

【例句仿写】他不仅学习数学很有天赋，也有毅力解决数学问题，从不放弃，这才是他成功的关键。

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三、写作迁移

假定你是李华，你校将以“My dream career”为主题，举办英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿。

1.你的职业梦想；

2.选择的理由；

3.如何实现。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.至少需要使用一个本文中解析过的句式；

4.注意段落内的逻辑关系。

Dear teachers and fellow students,

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Thank you for listening.

写作导引

➢ 激活思维

本次的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿。在演讲稿中，学生需要谈谈自己的职业梦想、选择的理由及如何实现，并且需要使用宾语从句或定语从句。这些写作要点和要求与所给语篇的主题语境是紧密相关的。我们可以通过整合同一主题的阅读材料的内容和语言，梳理写作思路和积累素材。

➢ 素材积累

本次的写作任务是基于同一主题的语篇阅读下的写作，我们可以通过学习、模仿并运用阅读中的语言表达，如词块和句型，积累写作的语言素材。

（一）自我介绍，说明演讲主题

1.I feel honored to give you a speech, whose topic is promoting public awareness of protecting the ocean, which is now a top priority.我很荣幸能为你们做一次演讲，本次演讲的主题是提升公众保护海洋的意识，这是当前的重中之重。

2.It is my great honor to be here to share with you my opinions on “Be smart online learners”.我很荣幸能在这里与大家分享我对“做聪明的网络学习者”的看法。

3.Today I want to talk to you about a very important subject.今天我想和你们讨论一个非常重要的话题。

（二）陈述演讲具体内容，表达观点

1.The reason why we should protect our environment immediately can be listed as follows.我们应该立刻开始保护环境的理由列举如下。

2.There is no doubt that/There is no denying that physical exercise is very important to our physical and mental health.毫无疑问的是，体育锻炼对我们的身心健康很重要。

3.What I strongly suggest is that we should set aside some time and exercise on a regular basis, making it part of our daily routine.我强烈建议我们应该留出一些时间，定期锻炼，让它成为我们日常生活的一部分。

4.More importantly, it is helpful for us to consult reference books or ask teachers when we encounter some difficulties.更重要的是，当我们遇到困难的时候，查阅参考书或者问老师是非常有帮助的。

5.In addition, I think it would be beneficial if you could read some Chinese books and magazines, which will help you to improve your reading ability.此外，我认为如果你能够阅读一些中文书籍和杂志，这将会非常有益，将有助于提升你的阅读能力。

6.If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.如果我们把这些事情做好，我们就能够健康快乐地成长。

（三）总结演讲内容，表达感谢

1.I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening! 我希望上面提到的能对你有所帮助！谢谢你的聆听！

2.Let me conclude my speech with the following comments.让我用以下评论来总结我的演讲。

3.From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that learning English is really important to us.通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论，学习英语对我们而言非常重要。

4.All in all, devoting my life to exploring space is meaningful to me.总而言之，奉献我的人生去探索太空对我而言是非常有意义的。

➢ 写作支架

本次的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿。根据任务中的要求，语篇结构可定为“点明演讲主题+演讲的具体内容+总结观点”。文章的框架如下：

Dear teachers and fellow students,

I am Li Hua.It is my great honor to be here to share...with you（点明演讲主题）

My dream career is to become...Since I was a child,...When I grow up, what I want to pursue is...In order to realize my dream,...There is no doubt that...In addition,...(演讲的具体内容)

All in all, devoting my life to...is meaningful to me.(总结观点）

Thank you for listening.

➢ 语篇过手

根据以上提供的主题、主题表达和语篇结构，写一篇演讲稿。第一段点明演讲主题；第二段陈述演讲的具体内容——你的职业梦想、选择的理由及如何实现；第三段总结观点。词数80左右。

同时，学习运用前文阅读中出现的宾语从句或者定语从句。尤其要注意文章的内在逻辑关系，以及语言的准确性、流利性和得体性。