湖北 陈裕明

正文是文章的主体部分，它是由若干个段落组成的。文章的正文应以文章的开头为线索，具体地叙述、说明或论证文章的主题。

现根据作文题型，就作文中的正文写作进行举例说明：

(一)要点类作文

要点类作文的体裁包括记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文等。基本要求是从一个话题出发，按照题纲要求进行写作，同时提出作者自己的观点，有一定的字数要求。

1.开门见山，进行正文的写作。

这类作文就是根据提示内容进行写作。提示内容较多时，基本不用拓展。例如：

上周六上午，你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘观光园（提示1）。首先听主人讲述了自己的故事：16岁时，车祸夺去了她的双腿，在政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采摘观光园，每年收入近百万元，并吸引了大量游客（提示2）。然后和园主合影，并在园内餐馆就餐（提示3）。

(提示1)Last Saturday morning, I rode to a Strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden with my parents, because it was not far from my home.(提示2)We listened to the story of the owner of the Strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden. At the age of 16, she lost both of her legs because of a car accident. With the help of the government and her family,she set up the Strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden. The annual income was close to one million yuan and it attracted a large number of tourists. (提示3)We also took photos with the owner and had lunch at the Strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden.

It was a great weekend and I had a wonderful time.

本文的正文部分是Last Saturday...and Sightseeing Garden.。作者依次完成了提示内容（即材料）的写作，因为字数的限制，拓展部分只有“because it was not far from my home”及短文最后一句“It was a great weekend and I had a wonderful time.”。

2.结合所给句子，进行正文的衔接和扩写。

结合所给出的句子和要点内容进行正文内容的扩写时，要注意关联词语的正确运用。例如：

请根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“How can we make ourselves safe? ”的英语短文。

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How can we make ourselves safe?

As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. Here are some of my suggestions.

First, (要点2)we are supposed to be careful when making friends online, which may cause unnecessary trouble.(要点4)Second, remember never to go swimming on our own in the river or lake because doing that will probably put ourselves into dangerous situations.(要点1)Besides, in order to eat healthily and safely, we'd better eat less junk food and not eat food that goes bad, for they will do harm to our health.(要点3)At last, when traveling outside, take care of our personal things and call the police for help in time if we are in danger.

In short, safety must come first!

虽然本文的行文方式使得提示内容顺序发生改变，但符合提示要求。要点2用句型be supposed to do sth.来强调“交友安全”，用which may cause unnecessary trouble来理解“不和陌生人交谈”；要点4使用祈使句remember never to...来强调“游泳安全”；要点1用besides来衔接上文，引入“饮食安全”；……