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在作文中，把話说清楚，把内容要点表达完整还不足以俘获评卷老师的“芳心”，好句子才能让评卷老师眼前一亮，给你高分。笔者在这里以2017年高考英语全国卷？玉卷书面表达为例，教你如何让普通的句子“靓”起来。

2017高考全国Ⅰ卷书面表达

假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：

（1）时间和地点；

（2）内容：学习唐诗；

（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

一、巧用形容词

普通句子

I plan to teach you some Tang poems.

Youll learn some poets like Li Bai and Du Fu.

Im writing to tell you some information of our next Chinese lesson.

优秀句子

I plan to teach you some excellent Tang poems.

Youll learn some famous and talented poets like Li Bai and Du Fu.

Im writing to tell you some further information of our next Chinese lesson.

牛刀小试

（1） Chinese poem is really a________________form of art.

（2） Tang poem is a________________component of________________Chinese traditional culture.

（3） You are going to touch the most________________and________________part of the Chinese culture.

参考答案（1）charming（2）significant， diverse（3）brilliant， beautiful

二、巧用副词

普通句子

Only in this way can you understand Tang poems.

Sticking to learning it， you will make enormous progress in it.

Im glad to share the beauty of Chinese with you in the past classes.

优秀句子

Only in this way can you understand Tang poems easily.

Sticking to learning it industriously， you will surely make enormous progress in it.

Sincerely， Im glad to share the beauty of Chinese with you in the past classes.

牛刀小试

（4）________________， the time made deep influence on Du Fu.

（5） You need to have a brief understanding of it in advance， which will be________________________________beneficial to your learning.

（6）As your Chinese improves________________，Im writing________________to tell you that Ill show you a new world of Tang poems， which you will fall in love with________________________________.

参考答案 （4）Obviously （5）immensely （6）quickly， happily， undoubtedly

三、巧用介词短语

普通句子

The next class will begin at 8：00 this Sunday morning.

I suggest that you have a brief knowledge of Tang Dynasty.

优秀句子

The next class， to be held in my home， will begin at 8：00 this Sunday morning.

In order to learn Tang poems better， I suggest that you have a brief knowledge of Tang Dynasty in advance.

牛刀小试

（7）Tang poem，________________________________， is regarded as a heritage of the excellent Chinese traditional culture.

（8）Before the class， youd better try to know the history of Tang Dynasty in advance________________________________surfing the Internet or reading some history books.

（9）________________________________， I suggest you should have a brief preview of Chinese Tang dynasty before taking the class.

参考答案 （7）with a long history （8）by means of （9）In order to learn the poems easily

四、巧用连接词

普通句子

We will have the class in the Room 301 of the library in town on Friday.

They help you learn more Chinese characters and provide you a glance of Tang dynasty.

Its better for you to learn some history of Tang Dynasty as a preparation before the class.

优秀句子

As usual， we will have the class in the Room 301 of the library in town on Friday.

Not only do they help you learn more Chinese characters， but also they provide you a glance of Tang dynasty.

Therefore， its better for you to learn some history of Tang Dynasty as a preparation before the class.

牛刀小试

（10）________________， what I want to teach you this time is your favorite part—Tang poem.

（11）I sincerely hope you keep on learning Chinese，________________Im always with you whenever you need help.

（12）________________should we learn the content of Tang poems，________________were supposed to understand the emotion of the poets.

参考答案（10）Moreover（11）and（12）Not only...but also...

五、巧用非谓语动词

普通句子

The class will be started at 8o clock this Sunday morning.

Youd better try to know the history of Tang Dynasty in advance.

Tang poem is an important part of Chinese culture.

优秀句子

Lasting for 1 hour， the class will be started at 8o clock this Sunday morning.

To study Tang poems better， youd better try to know the history of Tang Dynasty in advance.

Tang poem is an important part of Chinese culture， thus making it helpful for you to learn Chinese.

牛刀小試

（13） The next class，________________in my home， will begin at 8：00 this Sunday morning.

（14）________________you have a passion for Chinese poems， I plan to teach you some excellent Tang poems.

（15）As you know， my house owns a large number of books about Chinese poems， thus________________it convenient for us to find some materials right away.

参考答案（13）to be held（14）Knowing that（15）making

六、巧用复合句

普通句子

Dont hesitate to let me know your trouble.

Im writing to tell you something of the next class.

I place the lesson in my house.

優秀句子

If you have trouble in collecting materials， dont hesitate to let me know.

Im writing to tell you what I want to share with you in the next class.

I place the lesson in my house， which can provide us with a more comfortable environment.

牛刀小试

（16）I plan to introduce Li Bai，________________________________（非限制性定语从句）.

（17）I wonder________________________________（宾语从句）at 2：00 on Sunday afternoon.

（18） ________________________________（原因状语从句），it is better for you to do some preparations.

（19）I have prepared some Tang poems for you，________________________________（非限制性定语从句）.

（20）By the way，________________________________（条件状语从句）， you can learn about the history of Tang Dynasty ________________________________（原因状语从句）.

参考答案（16）who is one of the most famous poets writing Tang poems（17）whether it is convenient for you to come to my home（18）Since the theme of the class is poems of Tang Dynasty（19）which are translated in English and modern Chinese （20）if you are free， because it can help you learn Tang poems more easily

满分作文赏析

Dear Leslie，

I am glad that you have made great progress in learning Chinese. And Im writing to tell you what I want to share with you in the next class.

The next class， to be held in my home， will begin at 8：00 this Sunday morning. Knowing you have a passion for Chinese poems， I plan to teach you some excellent Tang poems. Not only do they help you learn more Chinese characters， but they also provide you a glance of Tang Dynasty， which is the most outstanding dynasty in Chinese history. Whats more， it is of great importance for you to make preparations， such as looking through some materials about Tang Dynasty in advance， through which you can get a better understanding of the emotion in the poems.

If you have trouble in collecting materials， dont hesitate to let me know. I will offer what I have as soon as possible.

Sincerely yours，

Li Hua