学生习作：

I have three friends. They is1 Jack, Gina and Kate. Jacks favorite subject is P.E.. He likes it because it is interested2. He has P.E. on Monday. Ginas favorite subject is music. She thinks it is very much3 relaxing. She likes to listen4 music after class. She has music on Wenesday5 and Friday. Kate likes history best. She likes it because it is funny. Kate has history on Thursday.

分析：

本文介绍了我的三个朋友以及他们喜欢上的课和在什么时候上这些课，条理清晰，但有几点需要注意：

1.此处是复数应用are。

2.说某物有趣应用interesting。

3.此处应去掉much。

4.listen为不及物动词，不及物动词不能直接加宾语，如果加宾语应用介词，listen后用介词to。

5.星期三的正确拼写为Wednesday。

范文:

I have three friends. They are Jack, Gina and Kate. Jacks favorite subject is P.E.. He likes it because it is interesting. He has P.E. on Monday. Ginas favorite subject is music. She thinks it is very relaxing. She likes to listen to music after class. She has music on Wednesday and Friday. Kate likes history best. She likes it because it is funny. Kate has history on Thursday.