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发言稿，即人们在某些特殊场合发表讲话的底稿，主要由称呼语、正文以及结束语三个部分组成，是初中英语书面表达中一种常见的应用文文体。对此，笔者分析了英语发言稿的常用句型和写作步骤，以期对同学们有所帮助。

【常用句型】

Good morning/afternoon/Hello， everyone/ladies and gentlemen/dear boys and girls

上午好/下午好/大家好/女士先生们/亲爱的同学们

May /can I have your attention， please？

请注意听我讲话好吗？

It is a great pleasure for me to have thechance to share with you…

我很高兴有机会和你们分享……

It's everyone's duty/responsibility to_

……是每个人的责任。

The thing we should do is to…

我们应该做的是……

It's important to…/More importantly，…/It is important that .../The main thing is to_

重要的是……

Personally/In my opinion/ It seems to methat…

在我看來，……

Let's try our best to…

让我们尽最大努力……

That's all. Thank you/Thanks for listen-ing！

就这些，谢谢聆听！

【写作任务】

假设你们班今天下午要开展以“校园节约，从我做起”为主题的班会活动，探讨校园里的浪费现象。请你根据下列提示内容，写一篇发言稿，呼吁同学们养成勤俭节约的良好生活习惯，从现在开始，从我做起，杜绝校园浪费。

内容：

（1）洗手后不关水龙头;

（2）离开教室时不关灯;

（3）吃饭挑食，不合胃口的饭菜随意扔掉;

（4）地上随处可见有用的纸张。

要求：

（l）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

（2）词数120左右。

【写作步骤】

第一步，认真审读题意，明确写作思路。仔细审读题十，可知该书面表达的体裁是发言稿，所以在写作时要注意发言稿的写作格式、人称和时态。因为该书面表达的内容探究的是当前校园里的浪费现象，故而写作时，时态用一般现在时态，人称应以第一人称为主，第三人称为辅。

文章的写作重点主要是论述校园里存在的浪费情况，在沦述时应注意举例，所举例子要包含题干中所给出的四个提示内容，要做到要点齐全，可以在此基础上适当想象、发挥。然后，就是针对校园浪费现象发表自己的看法和建议，并发出号召。此时，要注意紧扣写作主题，突出中心。最后，要注意发言稿结束语的准确运用和字数限制。

第二步，抓住提示要点，拟定写作提纲。根据题意和发言稿的格式，这篇书面表达的写作提纲可以这样拟写：

1.开头称呼语：

Good afternoon， boys and girls. May I haveyour attention please？

2.正文内容：

（1）引出话题：

We are sorry to see so much waste in ourschool.

（2）列举校园里的浪费事例：

①Don't turn off the taps after washinghands.

②Leave the lights on when leaving class-ro om.

③Pick about food， and throw away thefood what they don't like.

④Lots of useful paper can be seen every-where on the ground.

（3）发表看法，提出建议，发出号召。

①It is everybody's duty to fight againstwaste.

②The thing we should do is to save food.water and electricity.

③Let's try our best to make a good habitof save things around us.

④Let's do it from now on！ Putting an endto waste！

3.结束语：

That's all. Thank you for listening.

第三步，连句成文，书写规范。在这个过程中，同学们要注意连接词和过渡词的巧妙运用，确保语句衔接自然，语意连贯，条理清晰，层次分明。同时，还应注意书写的规范性，做到书写工整，卷面美观。

【参考范文】

Good afternoon， boys and girls.May I haveyour attention please？

We are sorry to see so much waste in ourschool. For example： some students don't turnoff the tap after washing their hands. Some stu-dents leave the lights on when they leave class-room. There are also some students often pickabout food， and throw away the food what theydon't like. Moreover， lots of useful paper canbe seen everywhere on the ground.

In my opinion， it is everybody's duty tofight against waste. The thing we should do isto save food， water and electricity. Let's try ourbest to make a good habit of save things aroundus. Let's do it from now on！ Putting an end towaste！

That's all. Thanks for listening.