海南省海南中学 张 伊

教学内容：

《阳光英语》第17级（高二上）《拉姆菲特先生的烦恼》（整本书阅读）。

教学目标：

1.借助提前阅读和图片环游的方式梳理故事发展过程（A3概括与整合；B1描述与阐释）（第一课时）；

2.分析、推断和评价四季的美丽以及意义，主人公释怀的原因（B2分析与判断；C1推理与论证；C2批判与评价）（第一课时）；

3.推断和评价本书的主题意义：人与自然规律—发现生活中的美、接受和尊重自然规律从而与之和谐共处（C1推理与论证；C2批判与评价）（第一课时）；

4.基于阅读沙龙和读者剧场活动，探究文章主题意义；深入感知文本之美，赏析描绘故事中打动他们的句子和段落；用文本写作特色完成情景写作（C1推理与论证；C2批判与评价；C3创造与想象）（第一课时&第二课时）。

教学重点：

1.学生提前阅读和借助图片环游，复述故事大致内容；

2.学生理解、分析和评价主人公的心理变化和四季的美丽以及意义；

3.学生通过阅读沙龙和读者剧场感受文本的美丽，品味优美的语句，赏析语言，课后运用。

教学难点：

1.学生分析和理解四季的美丽与价值男主人公接受四季的原因；

2.学生探索人与自然如何和谐共处，了解其意义，发现其美丽；

3.用文本写作特色完成情景写作。

教学过程：

Read in advance

1.Read the story carefully then retell it briefly based on the following pictures.

2.Underline the sentences or paragraphs that impress or inspire you most and think about why.

Free Talk

T：Good afternoon everyone！ I’m Miss Zhang from Hainan Middle School.As you all know，I’m from Haikou，which is really hot for a whole year，so my favorite season is Winter.How about you，guys?Which season is your favorite and why?

S：My favorite season is Winter too，because I like snow and ice and I can skate on the Songhua River.

T：Well，you can do a lot of snow activities in Winter.That’s great.Any other opinions?

S：My favorite season is Summer，because I think it is really fantastic.It has a lot of stories to tell and a lot of experiences to feel.

T：Yes，the sunshine，the heat...

S：And many big events，like the high school entrance exam and my middle school exam，all in Summer.I think it’s really important.

T：Great！ Now，is there any season you dislike and want to remove?

S：I want to delete the season—Summer.Because in Harbin，Winter is the most famous season but Summer sometimes makes the city a little annoying because it’s hot.

T：Trust me，I totally understand how you feel.

Picture Walk

T：Great，it seems that you have different opinions on four seasons.And yesterday we read an interesting story happening between four seasons and a man.Could you please tell me his name?Yes，Mr.Rumfitt.

T：This is him at the beginning.How did he feel?

S：Confused，not happy.

T：What about this one in the end?How did he feel now?

S：Happy.

T：Yes，he was wearing a broad smile.So from this to this.What made him change?

S：Seasons.

T：Fantastic！ But what exactly happened in between?Please retell the story briefly based on the following pictures to yourself in 1 minute.Later，I will invite one student to retell in class.

（学生准备。）

T：Any volunteers?

S：First，he was confused because the season is changing.So he decided to buy a valley and allowed no seasons to enter.But his well was dry and he had to meet the season of Spring.He enjoyed Spring and decided to buy some cabbages.Later，his well was dry again and he had to meet Summer.He also invited Summer to come in and he enjoyed what it brought.The well was dry again and he had to meet Fall and he seemed to make his apple trees happy.Finally，when he wake up he met the season of Winter.Because all of them needed to rest and sleep.So he allowed all seasons.

T：Great！ How do you like his retelling?Can you know what happened in the story from his retelling?

T：Yes，great.It seems that you’ve fully understood what happened in the story.

Jigsaw Reading

T：According to the boy，we know that at the beginning，Mr.Rumfitt refused four seasons，but at the end of the story，he welcomed them.Why did Mr.Rumfitt change his attitude towards them?Please have the question in mind and do a jigsaw reading in groups of four.Each student in the group just focuses on one season.And think about this question：Why did Mr.Rumfitt change his attitude towards the season you choose?Remember to write your opinions on the worksheet.You can start now.

（学生自己阅读并且完成worksheet。）

Group&Class Sharing

T：Now please share your opinions in groups.

（学生进行小组分享。）

T：Okay，anyone wants to share his her opinions with the class?Let’s start with Spring.Why did Mr.Rumfitt change his attitude towards Spring?

S：I think the reason why he changed his attitude towards the Spring is that Springtime helped his plum tree and made his valley lively and fantastic so he realized Springtime is so good and allowed it to come in.

T：Great！ Spring is so good.Can you find any examples to show the beauty of Spring in the book?

S：The Spring girl on page 10.She danced like a flower，like a tree，like a flame of green.

T：Yes，we can feel the energy of the Spring girl.That’s because the author used like...like...what kind of writing technique is used here?

S：Simile.

T：Other reasons?

S：Springtime came in.The boy and girl bring fresh energy to the valley.They danced and song，brought all the flowers into blossom.And the plum tree.His valley was bright with Spring.Mr.Rumfitt felt relaxed with Spring.

T：That’s right.The girl mentioned that Springtime brought a lot of blossoms to the flowers.What were the flowers like?

S：They were in different colors.

T：like...?

S：White，pink，purple...

T：Yes，Spring was full of colors.With all these，the colors，the blossoms...What else?

S：The willows put on their green veils.

T：Right，that’s so vivid，what kind of rhetorical device is used here?

S：Personification.

T：Now can you use one or two words to describe the beauty of Spring?

T：Like what color?

S：Green.

T：What does green mean in Spring?

S：Life.

T：You totally got the point！ So we can say Spring’s beauty lies in new life.（教师板书。）We can feel the new life and beauty of Spring because the author used many vivid writing techniques to show us instead of telling us it’s beautiful.This is what we call“Show！ Rather than tell！”This is what we can learn for our further writing especially when describing something beautiful.

T：Alright.After Spring came，who came next?

（教师和学生赏析夏秋冬三个季节。）

Pair Discussion

T：Now we can see four seasons are beautiful and meaningful in different ways.That’s why Mr.Rumfitt changed his attitude towards them.Now let’s see the order of them.It’s a...

S：A circle...

T：A circle of...

S：Life/nature...

T：This is how nature runs.With this circle，four seasons have beautified and enriched Mr.Rumfitt’s life.That’s why he accepted them.But at the very beginning，he didn’t like four seasons，thinking that“the world didn’t add up to anything”.But at the end of the story，he said...Let’s read it together...What’s the implied meaning of the two sentences?Please discuss it with your partner.

（学生进行同伴讨论。）

S：I think at first Mr.Rumfitt thought the change of seasons is meaningless.The world first gets hot and then cold.It’s meaningless.Why don’t we stay in the most comfortable season?

T：Oh，he didn’t understand why seasons run like this.

S：The second sentences showed that he found the meaning of the seasons.Although he couldn’t tell what it was，he could still feel it.

T：Oh，these feelings were beyond his descriptions.Great opinions！

...

T：This is how life runs.The rule of life.Can we change it?

S：No.

T：Maybe not.So all we can do is to accept it，find its beauty and respect it.

Reading Salon.

T：This is just what Mr.Rumfitt experienced in the story，and we also followed him to experience it.Now，I believe you must have a lot to share.Now please share the sentences and paragraphs that impress or inspire you most in groups.Please remember to read them emotionally and give reasons.

（学生准备阅读沙龙。）

T：Please come to the stage and share.

S：We can turn to page 24.I like what Mr.Rumfitt said at last.“Spring again soon，then Summer，then Autumn and Winter again.Very beautiful，very untidy.”It’s just like what Shelley had said：“If Winter comes，can Spring be far behind?“Shelley wants Spring but Mr.Rumfitt wants all seasons.That means what bothered Mr.Rumfitt now makes him look forward to it.He found a way to live with nature and life.He also found that beauty is everywhere，even in an untidy place.And nature is such a beautiful place for all of us.

S：It’s important for us to get along with the nature because it brings us to many things that we human beings cannot get.Try to think about it：If there is no season in our world，what will happen?People will do the things all the same，again and again.It would be very...boring.So I think season is a gift nature gives us.

（教师总结本课。）

Reader’s Theatre（Homework）

反思：

本次课所选择的文本是《阳光英语》分级阅读高二上，《拉姆菲特先生的困扰》这本绘本。……