吴玉婷 何冰清 解光琼等

短文改錯（共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

（一）

One day， I went to the Botanical Garden. When I walked along the road admired the flowers， I caught sight of two girls which were picking the flowers. I thought it wrong for them to do that. Without hesitate， I immediately asked them to stop. I was told them that we should protect these flowers in the gardens. I also explained that there would be no flowers left if someone picked the flowers like them. Then， they agreed to me， and promised that they wont do it again. Well， two girls were taking photos when I left here.

（华南师范大学附属中学 吴玉婷）

（二）

Zhang Zheng is my male god， who is a outgoing boy. He had a good command of English. When I find that difficult to convey my feelings with English， I always turn to him. He is very helpful and rely. Yesterday he made a speech under the flag， which theme is “English can accomplish our future”. After school I had a bunch of flowers delivering to him for his wonderful performance. He was so much thankful that he treated me a big meal. We encouraged each other to work hard in preparations for going to a key university.

（河南省渑池县第二高级中学 何冰清）

（三）

In the modern world， it is important to be well-informed. Success in many fields depend on getting the late information. At the same time， failure in policy-making often results from the lack of the necessary information. There are many ways of get information. First， we read newspaper and magazines. Second， we listen the news on the radio and watch them on television. Third， we surf the Internet for variously kinds of the information. As far as the role of information in the future is concerned， it is believed what information will play a more or more important part in the future.

（广东省韶关市曲仁中学 黄国华）

（四）

Recently， Tai Chi has became more and more popularer around the country. It is not only a ancient martial art， but has also been wide acknowledged as an effective health exercise. Famous for their graceful and well-balanced movement， Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are essential in our modern stressful life. Besides， if you want to learn Tai Chi ， you can contact with me. Im convinced that I can recommend the best school and best trainer in our city for you， for my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited instruct others all over the country. Remember， my number is 010-123456789

（广东省普宁市第二中学 陈棉俊）

（五）

This morning when I am taking a walk in the park， I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city. This was first time that I had seen a foreigner. I wanted to talk with him， but I was such excited and nervously that I didnt know what to do and how to start a conversation. Eager to practise my speaking English， I encouraged myself but went to say hello to him. He was very much friendly. As a native， I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty foods to him. Finally， he gave us some advice in how to improve my English. It was more than an experience！

（湖南省洞口县创新实验学校 刘淼梅）

（六）

Today the teacher had a talk with me. He asked me to take the charge of the class wall newspaper and asked me about his plan for running it. I thought an honour to be appointed as the editor of the wall newspaper， and I was confidently I could do a good job. But I gladly accepted the job， and promise to tell him my plan in detail tomorrow. Now I have decided that I will invite any of my good friends to joining in the designing of the wall newspaper. Everyone will be encouraged to express their opinion on running it and to write articles about it.

（广东省汕头市第一中学 黄少芳）

（七）

Nowadays， many young people like to stay up， because there are a lot of night activities attract them. These young people work in the office in the daytime， so they need to hang out and find any fun at night， which lead to staying up. Recently， a 26-year-old girl was diagnosed with（被诊断患有）cancer. While she got to know it， she just couldnt believe it， thinking that the fate must play jokes with her. I started to take a look back at her past days. She overworked or always stayed up. How regret she was. If giving another chance， she would not stay up.

（廣东省普宁市华美实验学校 陈碎仍）

（八）

Dongdong is only five years old. He is old enough to go to school， and has to learn a lot every day. His parents is very strict with him， expect him to become a famous person in the future. He is busy with working all day， as a grown-up. Early in the morning his father taught him English. After breakfast he learns to play piano. Although he is a child， he has to practice playing the piano again and again until her mother feels satisfy . In the afternoon his father takes him to an art school to learn how to draw picture.

（广东省韶关市曲仁中学 黄国华）

（九）

Last weekend， I went camping with Jane. As we were making fire and putting off the tent at dusk， we suddenly hear a scream. Followed the sound， we found a girl， whose right leg was bleeding， lying on the ground and crying painful. I brought my first-aid box there immediately， took out clean towel and pressed the girls wound with it. A few minute later， it stopped bleeding. Then， I helped him wash the wound.

The girl was grateful for which I had done and insisted that she would visit my house after recovering. Meanwhile， I felt joyful and content because of I had helped someone in need.

（广东省佛山市南海执信中学 黄欣欣）

（十）

Something did wrong last weekend. After having breakfast， I decided to some funs with my new bicycle. My parents told me not ride them on the road but I didnt listen. I was enjoying myself while I saw a car running for me. I wanted to move to the road side but I lose my balance. Before I knew that what was happening， the car threw me several meters away. When I woke up， I was in the hospital. My mother held my hands， told me that I was bad injured in the accident. This taught me huge lesson.

（安徽省合肥潤安公学 解光琼）

（十一）

Dear Ms.Chen，

Im Li Hua， a student from Class 2， Grade 3. Im writing to apply the position as a student volunteer.

I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because that I want to improve my organizational skills， communication skills as well as my confidences in speaking English in public. As a outgoing girl， I got along well with my classmates. Beside， I have such a good command of English that I am electing as assistant to my English teacher.

I am sure that I can perfect live up to my expectations. I will be grateful whether you could give me a kind consideration.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

（广东省深圳市福田区梅林中学 刘 璐）

（十二）

It was a fine day last Saturday. However， our class organize a trip to the Central Park on that day. In the park， there were so many peoples. It was very crowded that we soon couldnt catch up our monitor，our organizer and guide. About 15 minutes late， we found him finally. He told us that he was helped the cleaning workers clean the park. Some people didnt pay enough attention to our own behaviour， throwing away rubbish here and there， that made the park very dirty. We all felt proud of him. After a simple lunch， we went to home with a happy heart.

（广东省云浮市新兴一中 肖世奇）

（十三）

During the Three Kingdoms Period， someone presents Caocao with a huge elephant. He was wondered how heavy it was and asked his officials about them. However， nobody could come up to a practical idea. Caochong， which was only 6 years old then， suggested taking the elephant onto a boat in the river and made a mark on the boat where the water level was. Then he told people to carry stone onto the boat until it sank down to same level. Weighing the stones， he knew the weight of the elephant. Caocao praised him for his wise and said none of his men were bright than him.

（安徽省合肥润安公学 解光琼）

（十四）

Dear Sir，

Im writing to ask for a chance to be one of the host families for the British students.

The following is my reasons. First， we own a big house and a private car， which makes it conveniently for the British students to go to school and back home. In addition， I am good at English and our parents are both English teachers. I believe that there will be no problems in our conversation. More importantly， my family had hosted two American students last year. However， we have experience in looking for the students. We are sure that we could offer a pretty good condition to them.

I would appreciate if you could agree with my application.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

（廣东省罗定中学 李再廷）

（十五）

Dear Sir or Madam，

Im Li Hua. Knowing that our school newspaper is advertising for an English editor， I show great interest in them. Thus， I am written to apply for the position.

I have been learning English for over a decades， having good command of English. I once attended an English Writing Competition and win first place. Whats more， I have received some relevant professional training but I would like to put that I have learned into practice. If I win the position， I will spare no effort to serve for the students.

I would appreciate it if my application could be serious considered. Looking forward for your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

（广东省汕头市下蓬中学 罗丽雯）

（十六）

I like watching movies very much and I think watching English movies is a effective method of learning English. Last year， I joined in the English Club in our school， which benefit me a lot. The club were made up of twenty students， most of which were interested in English. They watched ten original English movies， includes the classic Casablanca， Rebecca， A Tale of Two Cities and so on. We watched each of the film several times until we full understood them. By now， I find that I have nearly become fluent as a native English speaker.

（广东省深圳市梅林中学 王小琴）

（十七）

Wednesday， June 12， Sunny

Last Sunday afternoon， some of my best friend and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood. We really had a good time play football！ Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it fly at a window. It was unfortunate that the window was broken！An angrily woman looked out of a window， shouting at us. We were all too frightening！She came to us and asked whom did that. I hurried to said sorry to her. The woman forgave him and told us not to play football around in next time. What bad day！

（广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

（十八）

Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safely at school is especially important to us students. First， we should take care not to get themselves injured while we are having sports. Second， there are too much students at school， and our hallways is too narrow. So dont crowded with each other especially when we go to upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be a accident. Besides， we should friendly and get on well with others， dont quarrel or even fight. Last but not least， we should be careful to eat health food and keep away from junk food， that is harmful to our health.

（广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

（十九）

Reading is very important. We can get knowledges through reading. It can not only opens our minds， but also make us cleverer or happier. Our study can be improved if you read more good books. The more we read， the more we learn， and the bright our future will become.

However， some students spend time watching the TV or going on line to play games. It takes many of their spare time. On my opinion， everyone should read more books， especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese tradition culture to the world.

（廣东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

（二十）

It is known that a outstanding student is popular with all people. However， how to be outstanding is still puzzled among some students. My viewpoints is as follows.

First， we must learn to behave well， follow the school rules or obey the laws. Secondly， we should form the habit of be punctual. No matter what do， we should do it well and on time. Thirdly， studying hard to gain high marks is which we try to pursue to go on to university.

From all the above， I believe that if we do well in these aspect， we are sure to become outstanding students！

（广东省吴川市第三中学 李华军）

（二十一）

Of all the subject， I like Chinese best because I have/＼ excellent Chinese teacher， Ms Sun. She has been taught us for only three months， but she is thinking highly of by all the students.

Ms Sun is 36 years old and she is neither tall nor short. She is always the last to leaving her office. She always tries to make her classes interest and lively but we are getting on well with each other. On the other hand， she is very strict in us in our studies， which make our Chinese improved. We all think of that she is the best teacher we have met in the school.

（湖南省衡南县第三中学 资 娟）

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