广东 袁丹纯

阿拉斯加州一个小女孩彭妮进入了一个神秘的森林，她跳进了森林里的魔法洞，来到了暖和的沙滩边……

难词探意

1. suck /sʌk/ v. 吮吸；啜；吸

2. twig /twɪɡ/ n. 细枝；嫩枝

3. spin /spɪn/ v. （使）快速旋转；急转弯；疾驰

Penny was a little girl who lived in Alaska. It was ice-cold there. She kept praying that she could play in green and warm gardens like we do. But of course, she couldn't.

Her father, like all the men there, didn't have a job. He hunted seals and caught fishes, as was the custom. So her father hadn't even heard of money and even if he had money, there weren't any aeroplanes to take them abroad.

Near Penny's house was a deep, dark forest.Everyone was afraid to enter it. They said that whoever entered it would be sucked in by a magic hole.

One day, Penny was playing with her Eskimo friends when one of the boys shouted, “Hey, I dare one of you to enter the magic forest.”

No one dared. Penny picked up a twig and threw it at the edge of the forest. Nothing happened.Penny felt astonished. “It's all a legend! We can play hide-and-seek in the woods if we want,” she thought. She walked slowly towards the woods. It was getting colder and colder as she took each step.She walked right into the middle of the forest.

There was a small hill with a great big hole right in the middle of it. She wanted to jump into it.She took a big, deep breath and jumped.

There was a sinking feeling in her stomach. She realized that she was falling down deep somewhere. But she did not land. Her head was spinning and suddenly all her fur clothes disappeared and there was a skirt and blouse instead of them. She was at the beach.

She found that she had a bag with her. Inside the bag there was a swimsuit, a mat, a book, a bottle of lotion（护肤液） and a towel. She took all these home.

Ⅰ. Difficult sentences

1. Even if he had money, there weren't any aeroplanes to take them abroad.

译文：就算他有钱了，也不会有飞机载他们出国。

分析：本句中的even if表示“即使”的意思，引导让步状语从句。take sb to some place意为“带某人去某地”。

2. They said that whoever entered it would be sucked in by a magic hole.

译文：他们说无论谁进入森林，都会被魔法洞吸进去。

分析：本句的that引导宾语从句，whoever引导主语从句。

Ⅱ. Useful expressions

Expressions for emotion

1. She kept praying that she could play in green and warm gardens like we do.

2. Everyone was afraid to enter it.

3. No one dared.

4. Penny felt astonished.

5. She took a big, deep breath and jumped.

6. There was a sinking feeling in her stomach.

Expressions for environment

1. It was ice-cold there.

2. It was getting colder and colder as she took each step.

3. There was a small hill with a great big hole right in the middle of it.

Ⅲ. Pattern to learn

Near Penny's house was a deep, dark forest.

分析：“表示地点的介词词组+谓语+主语”是一个倒装的表达，强调了地点状语。

仿写：那座小教堂矗立在山顶上。

阅读上面的短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:

When she almost stepped out of the forest, she heard her family crying._____________________

Paragraph 2:

However, Penny didn't say.________________________________________________________

写作导引

一、分析语篇，理清要素

要想续写内容与所给材料内容连贯、衔接紧密，必须充分了解所给材料的大意。 本文是一篇

记叙文，文章分析如下：

二、阅读续写开头语，展开合理想象

我们可以基于标题、原文本和续写段落首句提供的信息，构思要续写的故事情节。 这一构思分为四步：

第一步，根据已给出的文本判断文章的立意。

根据续写第一段的首句 “When she almost stepped out of the forest, she heard her family crying.”， 我们可以推测出Penny跳进魔法洞，来到了温暖的沙滩后，又平安回到了现实中的家。 前文没有交代她的旅程经过、 感受和收获， 接下来或会有所交代。 从续写第二段的首句“However,Penny didn't say.”可以看出，续写第一段中Penny的家人——爸爸应该询问了她一些关于本趟旅程的问题，但是她没有回答。