吴安运

◎文体概述

环保，是摆在当今世界各国人民面前的一个沉重话题。环保与发展，更是人们关心的焦点和热点。环保话题不但能够考查同学们对现实生活的关心程度、对事物的观察能力，而且能够培养同学们的环保意识。

此外，人口增长、土地、粮食、住房、环境污染、课本资料回收、倡导创建绿色学校等也属于这一话题。

◎写作模板

模板范文

Protecting the environment

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example， automobile emissions have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore， wherever we go today， we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is， in fact， threatening our existence.

The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately， more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with them by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problems will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.

◎经典句型

Protecting the environment is everyones responsibility. 保护环境是每一个人的责任。

It's everyones duty to love and protect the environment. 爱护和保护环境是每个人的责任。

It's everyones responsibility/duty to protect the environment. 保护环境，人人有责。

It is known to us all that water is the source of life. 众所周知，水是生命之源。

We should plant more trees in order to live better and more healthily in the future. 为了将来我们的生活过得更好、更加健康，我们应该种更多的树。

What we have done does great harm to us as well as to the surroundings. 我们所做的给我们自己还有我们的环境带来了很大的危害。

Most people lack the sense of environmental protection， so we should awake people's awareness of it. 大多数人缺乏环境意识，因此我们应该唤醒人们的这种意识。

We need to protect the earth because it is our home. 我们需要保护地球，因为它是我们的家园。

We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this， life on the earth cannot survive. 我們一边耗尽自然资源，一边用危险的化学制品污染环境。如果我们继续这样做的话，地球上的生物将难以生存。

If everyone could make a big contribution to environmental protection， our home will become much more beautiful. 如果每个人为环境保护作出一点贡献，我们的家园会变得更加美丽。

We should establish a harmonious relationship between mankind and nature. 我们应该建立人与自然的和谐关系。

Great changes have taken place in China， since China began its reform and open up policy. 改革开放以来，中国发生了翻天覆地的变化。

If we don't save water， the last drop of water will be a teardrop of us. 如果我们不节约水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪。

◎典题链接

假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了环境保护相关的活动。他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节。请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。

要求：

1. 活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受;

2. 词数100左右;

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike，

I'm glad to hear that

Yours，

Li Hua

【试题解读】

1. 审题立意

本文属于开放式应用作文，其特点是要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力和创造力，以“环境保护”为主题，给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。该篇书面表达所选取的话题与学生的日常生活息息相关，话题符合学生实际，学生能够有话可说。所以，在写作过程中，考生应认真阅读题目要求，根据题目要求的话题设想内容要点，组织篇章结构，一定要注意构思要清晰，详略应得当，同时要运用必要的过渡词语，以使文章连贯。

2. 写作信息要点

（1）介绍自己做了什么样的一件事或参与了什么样的活动;

（2）自己在这次活动中做了什么;

（3）这件事或这次活动给自己带来的影响或收获。

3. 注意事项

（1）文章讲述曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动，应以一般过去时态为主;

（2）文章内容应该积极向上，切合实际;

（3）合理使用过渡性词语，以增强文章的连贯性。

【佳作赏析1】

Dear Mike，

I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen， we did a good job. Last Sunday， my classmates and I went to the neighboring community near our school. On arriving there，①we gave a speech on the importance of protecting our environment， which attracted a lot of people.②Then we were divided into five groups and tried to collect the rubbish in the community. Influenced by us，③many people joined us and began to pick up the rubbish. It wasnt long before④ the community got clean and tidy. Though we were a bit tired， we still felt very happy.⑤

Now the environment around us is becoming better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours，

Li Hua

亮点分析：

本文作者具有良好的英语语言驾驭能力，能够根据写作要求准确地完成写作任务。文章脉络清晰、语言地道、行文流畅、布局完美。此外，作者在写作过程中使用了on arriving there等高级句型，赋予了文章别样的风采。此外，定语从句、过去分词作状语和固定句型的正确使用充分彰显了作者扎实的语言功底。

①on arriving there相当于as soon as we arrived，语言简洁而不乏高级。

②which引导的为非限制性定语从句。

③过去分词作状语，它的正确使用使行文连贯且富有生机，提升了文章的档次。

④固定句型It wasn't long before...意为“没过多久就……”，它的合理运用能充分体现作者对重点句型的深刻领悟。

⑤这句话表达了作者虽然劳累但很快乐的心态，使文章首尾呼应、更具有说服力。

【佳作赏析2】

Dear Mike，

I'm glad to hear that youre interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen， we did a good job. Last Sunday， our teacher organized us to clean up the Center Park. All the students took part in① the activity. We were divided into three groups.② The first group swept the ground. The second group picked up the fallen leaves and empty bottles. The third group took out the rubbish. To our surprise，③ there were other people in the park joining us④， too. We spent the whole morning finishing it.⑤ Many of us were very tired but happy when we saw the beautiful park.

Now the environment around us is becoming better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours，

Li Hua

亮點分析：

本文内容中肯质朴，作者能够按照试题要求真诚朴实地介绍了自己曾经参加的一次活动。文章思路清晰，语言顺畅，注意到句型的变换和运用。文章大量使用take part in、 be divided into、 to our surprise、 spend time doing等高级词汇，为文章增色添彩，提升了文章档次。

①take part in属于高级短语，意为“参加”。

②此句为过渡句，起到了承上启下的作用，顺畅地引出了我们参加的活动。

③to our surprise意为“让我们吃惊的是”， 虽然看似不起眼，但它却把前后句子紧密地衔接在一起，使文章过渡自然、顺畅。

④joining us为现在分词作后置定语。

⑤spend time doing是固定结构，意为“花时间做某事”。

◎小试牛刀

假定你是李华，作为新时代的中学生，你觉得保护环境尤为重要。请用英语写一篇短文向你学校学生会表达你对保护环境的看法。要求：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清楚。

Dear Students Union，

Yours，

Li Hua