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高考英语全国卷中推荐信写作导练

2017-04-08胡新萌

广东教育·高中 2017年3期
关键词:推荐人推荐信李华

胡新萌

一、文体概述

推荐信是写给个人或单位的求职或求学的信件,应对方的需求在内容上有不同的侧重点,一般包括以下内容:(1)推荐人与被推荐人的关系;(2)被推荐人的能力与经历; (3)被推荐人的个性特点。不论何种推荐信,都是以第三人称展示个人技能或特点。

二、必备短语

1. recommend to you my best friend 向你推荐我最好的朋友

2. an all-around student 一个全面的学生

3. be qualified for/be equal to能胜任

4. have a good command of精通

5. sense of responsibility责任感

6. be experienced in 在……方面有经验

7. work as a part-time assistant 担任兼职助理工作

8. possess a great team spirit 有很强的团队精神

9. with a pleasant mature attitude 开朗成熟

10. easy to get along with 容易相处

三、套用句式

1. I am writing this letter to strongly recommend to you my best friend Li Ming, a promising youth. 我写这封封信向您强烈推荐我最好的朋友李明,一个有前途的青年。

2. He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects, which ensures his good performance for the position. 他各科成绩优秀,全面发展,这些条件保证他在这个职位上能有好的表现。

3. It is my belief that with his intelligence, diligence, and rich experience, he has great potential for further development in the field of ... 我相信,以他的智慧、勤奋和丰富的经验,他在……的领域进一步发展,有很大的潜力

4. I genuinely hope that you could schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenienc我真诚地希望在您方便的时候,能尽早安排时间面试他。

5. I recommend him to you without any reservation. Please do not hesitate to inquire further if I can be of help to you. 我毫无保留地推荐他。有需要了解他更多的信息,请不要犹豫尽管问我。

四、习作修改 下列习作中共有10处错误,每句最多两处,请改正。

Dear professor,

It is my great honor to recommend Li Ming, one of my classmate, to support his application to study in his university. He has a good command of Computer Software and is expert science. During the three years study he has done a excellent job. Every year he got the first grade scholarship. And he also gets the title of the Excellent Graduate. He is an enthusiastic but progressive young man with highly potentiality. He is not only quick at the learning but also good at solving difficult problems with logical mind. I am sure that he will become the top student in your university whether he can be accepted. I hope my recommendation will receive your favor consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

五、課堂练习

假定你是李华,你校外籍教师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游,需聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游。请写一封邮件推荐你的朋友李明给他。要点如下:

1. 写信目的;

2. 介绍李明的优势;

3. 希望安排面试。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 文章的开头和结尾已为你写出;

3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Williams,

_________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

六、课外作业

假设你是李华,得知你的美籍朋友开的公司在华招聘兼职销售员,你的校友李明有意应聘,请按下列要点给该公司写一封推荐信。

1. 你和李明的关系;

2. 李明的知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历;

3. 附李明的求职信和简历。

注意:1. 词数:100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

_________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

参考答案与范文

习作修改

本文是李华向教授推荐他的同学李明到教授所在大学学习。

1. classmate→classmates 因one of后加名词复数。

2. his→your 因是推荐李明到professor所在的学校,因此人称代词应用your。

3. 在expert和science中间加in 因be expert in,是指在某些方面的专家,固定搭配。

4. a→an 因excellent是以元音音素开头,不定冠词应用an。

5. get→got 描述过去获得的成绩,谓语动词应该用过去式。

6. but→and 指他热心、进步,是并列关系,用and连接。

7. highly→high 修饰名词potentiality(潜力)用形容词。

8.划去learning前的the 指学习能力好,搭配为be good at doing sth。

9. whether→if 意指如果能被你们学校录取,他将会是你们学校优秀的学生,是条件状语,不用whether引导,应用if。

10. favor→favorable 修饰名词应该用形容词。

课堂练习

Dear Mr Williams,

Informed that you want a companion as a tour guide to travel around China, I strongly recommend my friend Li Ming to you.

Li Ming is a graduate majoring in English, which helps him communicate with you without difficulty. Moreover, he is enthusiastic about tourism and has worked as a part-time guide. Its his relevant experiences that ensure him more qualified for this position. What makes him admirable is that under no circumstance will he fail to cope with emergencies.

Should you favor him with the position, Im convinced that he would live up to your expectations. I hope you can schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience. Please contact me at 12345678.

Yours,

Li Hua

课外作业

Dear Sir or Madam,

Having learned that your company needs some part-time salesmen, Im both honored and pleased to recommend to you Li Ming, one of my schoolmates.

Not only does Li Ming have a broad knowledge of the products sold by your company, but he has worked as a part-time salesman. He has a good command of English, so the communication between your headquarters and him is just a piece of cake. Furthermore, his strong spirit of teamwork is highly appraised by everyone, which is closely related to his intelligence and diligence, coupled with a good competence and pleasant personality.

Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration, it would be highly appreciated. For more information, you can refer to his resume and application letter enclosed.

Yours,

Li Hua

責任编辑 蒋小青

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