李琼霞

【写作任务】

随着科技的发展，机器人将逐渐走进我们的生活。请发挥你的想象力，以“Robots in the future”为题，介绍一下你心目中理想的未来机器人，要点包括：

1. 未来机器人的重要性;

2. 未来机器人的特性;

3. 未来机器人的功能。

【写作指导】

1. 审题定调

这是一篇典型的想象类文章，是一种创造性的写作，属于开放式的作文。这类写作通常只给出一个主题或是一些不完整的素材，让学生在此基础上发挥想象力，自由发挥与创造。要写好这类文章，首先要从实际生活出发，借助已有的知识展开合理的、丰富的想象;其次，写作内容要具体，要根据题目的要求和提示丰富文章内容，切记说空话。

2. 确定主体内容

根据题目要求，文章应包括以下内容：首先，要点明机器人在人类未来生活中的重要性;然后发挥想象力描述一下未来机器人的特性;最后说明未来机器人的各种功能。

针对这篇习作，可以把全文分为四段：

第一段：提出机器人在人类未来生活中的重要性。

第二段：描述未来机器人的特性。

第三段：举例说明未来机器人的功能。

第四段：总结未来机器人的发展会越来越好。

3. 確定人称、时态

人称为第三人称;时态以一般将来时为主。

4. 常用表达

①表示事物的重要性

It will play an essential role in our daily life.

The importance of... can not be ignored.

It plays an important part in...

②表示物品的外形特征等特性

It looks like...

They are in the shape of different objects.

They can become... according to peoples various needs.

③表示事物的功能作用

What makes it outstanding is its great functions.

It is designed to...

It can do so many things for human beings， including...

【范文展示】

Robots in the future

With the development of science， robots in the future will play an essential role in our daily life.

Future robots are not only like human beings but also in the shape of different objects. For example， they can become a plane or a ship according to peoples various needs. Whats more， future robots will get energy from the sun， which is quite environmentally friendly and energy-saving.

What makes future robots outstanding is their great functions. They can do so many things for human beings， including doing all the housework at home， working as a tutor and playing with children. In addition， they can sort out the rubbish， recycling it wisely.

With the breakthrough of technology， I strongly believe that future robots will become better and better.