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Dear Jackson，

I will be your guide. I advise you to visit the Art Museum. We can go there ①by bus or by subway. Taking a bus is better， we can enjoy the beautiful scenery of this city . You ②like Chinese culture a lot ， I think you will enjoy there.

③Chinese paintings are very wonderful. You can see many of them painted by some famous artists this weekend. From them you can learn more about Chinese culture and history. And paper-cutting is another Chinese traditional culture. You can learn how to cut there， cut a fish， a cock， a cat， some flowers， etc. ④Dont you want to go there this weekend ？ I cant wait ！ What about you ？

I hope you will have fun this weekend. If you want to there， write back soon.

Yours，

Li Ming

？筠简评：

这是一封电子邮件，是英语写作中的一种常见形式，小作者开篇入题，给人一种简单明快的感觉，引起读者的兴趣。①处又提出了自己的见解，表达了小作者出行经验丰富。②处又运用了like， enjoy 两个动词，既体现了作者擅长英语词汇，又使收信方感到亲切，增加了文章的可读性。③处用了过去分词，定语从句，表现出了作者英语功底的深厚，增加了文章的亮点，④处运用否定疑问句，以及I can't wait ！ 又一次增加了此文的可读性。

指导教师：张淑红