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2008-11-25胡天远胡永德

中学生英语高效课堂探究 2008年11期
关键词:水立方笔友连贯

胡天远 胡永德

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假如你叫李明,你的澳大利亚笔友John发来电子邮件,向你询问“水立方”的有关信息。请根据下面的提示给John回一封电子邮件,简单介绍“水立方”。

注意:1. 词数:120左右;2. 短文的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;3. 短文须包括表中所有要点,可适当增减细节,以使行文连贯; 4. 参考词汇:水立方 the Water Cube; 花样游泳synchronized swimming

Dear John,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Swimming Centre—Water Cube. Now Id like to introduce it to you.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

参考范文:

Dear John,

In your last email, you showed a great interest in our National Swimming Centre—Water Cube. Now Id like to introduce it to you.

The Water Cube is located in Beijing Olympic Sport Park, and covers an area of 79532 square metres, and has a seating capacity of about 11,000 spectators. The construction was started in December 2003, and was completed in January 2008. Its design plan—H2O3 was produced by the global design competition. It cost about 1.02 billion yuan. Swimming, diving and synchronized swimming can be held there.

The Water Cube is highly thought of by officials, experts and athletes. Many foreign athletes gave the thumbs up to its design and thought of it as an incredible symbol in the history of the global Games.

I hope that my introduction satisfies you. Welcome to the Water Cube if it is convenient to you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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下面是2008年北京奥运会期间出现的三个场面。请根据所提供的信息,就三名运动员的表现发表自己的看法。

注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 可能用到的单词:110米跨栏:110-metre hurdles跳马:vault 平衡木:balance beam跆拳道:teakwondo

参考范文:

Among the three players of Liu Xiang, Cheng Fei and Su Liwen, I appreciate Miss Sus performance most. In spite of the hurt in her knees and being knocked down lying on the ground many times, she didnt give up the competition. In the end, her coach had to carry her on his back off the playground. She didnt win any medal, but she won cheers from the spectators present. We are all moved by her spirit of struggling to the end.

As we all know, Cheng Fei is the queen of vault. She won many gold medals in different competitions, but she won only two bronze medals because of her careless mistakes this time. She didnt lose heart and we dont give her less love or respect. She is still a heroine in our eyes. We should learn the courage of facing difficulty from her.

However, to our unexpectation, Liu Xiang, a flying person in Asia, announced he dropped out of the 110-meter hurdles of himself. Epecially to our disappointment, we cant see his excellent performance. What makes us puzzled most is whether his giving up the competition because of the hurt in the ankles is true or not. We all feel ourselves fooled by Liu Xiang.

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如今大学生找工作难。长着一副好面孔有时就会变成超越竞争对手的一副砝码。最近,在你们班英语课上老师组织了一次主题为“Does beauty really make much sense?”的讨论。根据下面同学的讨论结果用英语写一份总结材料并谈谈你对以上主题的看法。字数:100-120左右

Does beauty really make much sense?

Last week in our English class, we had a very heated discussion on the topic “Does beauty really make much sense?” Some students think that a fair face is a letter of recommendation. Good-looking appearance often makes a big difference in social communication, social competition, job hunting and so on. Not only can it make you become more confident but also it makes a lasting impression on the interviewer in the job interview.

Other students hold different opinions. They think charming appearance doesnt make any difference. Spiritual beauty is more important. A capable person is not necessarily good-looking. And similarly a fair-looking guy is not necessarily one with a great talent and kind heart.

In my opinion, both physical beauty and spiritual beauty are of the same importance. What I mean is that we should never ignore our spiritual beauty training while simply pursuing pretty appearance.

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